Friday 17 March 2017

Work on Writing


I was in a black cave. I had the golden key with heaps of leaves. I had a clock with me. I saw a big eye and razor sharp teeth ... it was a BIG monster! Run! Run! Run out of the cave! OHHHHHH, it's Mum!

Author Lachie



The Sea Dog

"Arghhh, there's a dog in the water. Oh no, I know what he's after, he's after the ball. Wait, what??? That's my ball! Hey get back here dog!"
"No! There's a human in the water, she is after my ball and I've got to get the ball before she does."
"Oh, he's so cute. No, I need to focus. Ah ha, I've got the ball. Take that dog!"
"Ruff, ruff!"
"AHHHH, no, he's got the ball. Oh no, now I still have it!"

Author Stevie

Air Buddies

"Wowsers, look Coochie, it's a flying clown!" I said. "And he's evil! This is very bad and if we do not stop him he will take over the world!"

Author Ella





2 comments:

  1. Ha ha ha very funny my favorite one is the second.

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  2. What cool writing room 2 it is fantastic.

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