Friday, 23 March 2018

Writing in Room 2

We are learning to write a sentence correctly. By Arden

A sentence is a thought that you could write down on a piece of paper. By Campbell

First we put a capital letter at the start of our thought and then we put a full stop at the end of our thought. By Bella

Here are some sentences that the children have written during Work on Writing time, and have changed so that they are correct sentences. By Mrs Olynsma

We have to stop the evil Doctor Nappy. By Isabelle

One day in a little village there lived a family. By Charlie

They were going to whoppy cushion the world and I've got to tell Batman and the Avengers. By Campbell

There was a big earthquake and the sea lost control and the sea water went all over the world. By Esther

One day I was walking down the road. By Lucas

Once upon a time a time a little girl was running away from a horrible witch. By Liam

She was amazing with what she could do. By Bella

So then Vision came and then Falcon came. By Max C

After this do you want to do motor cross? By Toby

The baby flew into the sky and she was farting too. By Cash

Once upon a time there was a little girl who got lost in the forest. By Isaac

Once upon a time there was a girl called Alice. By Paige

A little girl is asleep and pirates are taking her. By Cooper

Once upon a time there was a sea and the water came above the cars. By Ben

Batman had a picnic. By Hailey

I was walking up the hill one day and I saw a whole bundle of super heroes. By Thomas

There was a little village and the village was made out of coffee. By Zara

I pounced on a rhinoceros and it was just like riding a pony or a horse. By Arden

They stared at me. By Lucy

It was yummy, the food was yummy and the best part was dessert. By Blake

Please come into Room 2 and ask the children if they can share the story with you that their sentence came from! By Mrs Olynsma


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