Friday, 17 February 2017

The Snail and the Strawberry - Work on Writing Task





"The snail is biting me," yelled the Strawberry.
"Help me, that strawberry was yummy but help me get down now!" screamed the Snail.


Written by Juan






"Oh no, a big fat strawberry has fallen on me," said the Snail. "How will I get out of this strawberry? I know, I can slide out. Oh no there is a big fall ... agrhhhhhhhhhhh! Ow, that hurt. I hate that strawberry. Oh no it is going to fall on me ... run! Oh good it went the other way. Mum, Dad I found a big strawberry."


Written by Alannah






I saw a big juicy strawberry on the other side. I saw a snail. I was sad because the snail was going to eat the strawberry.


Written by Blake

4 comments:

  1. I really liked Juan's story when he fell from the strawberries. I don't think I will eat strawberries after seeing that grose snail!

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  2. I dont think I will look at another strawberry ever again.

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  3. Wow, what awesome writing Room 2! You are so clever.

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